|Reviews for Waiting For You|
| Leaving Here 6/21/06 . chapter 1
| Shaman-Empress 6/8/06 . chapter 1
Wow. Your poetry is really good! I like the way you describe things: it's unique and makes me feel as though I can reach out and touch it.
Oh, and thanks for the review- you are much too kind to say that my stuff is good, though. _ If you haven't been published yet, I would be surprised.
| Leo Eigenmann 6/2/06 . chapter 1
I like this is frank anbd direct to the point in its theme. I like your craftsmanship in poetry. Thumbs up.
| simpleplan13 3/17/06 . chapter 1
so bittersweet... i love it! especially that second stanza... awesome
| les petits bateaux 3/11/06 . chapter 1
Beauty at its best. "As much as by the touch of a lover's caress"...that soothed me. Sensual and somewhat morbid. :)
| Carp 2/16/06 . chapter 1
Peaceful, beautiful...the imagery is really heartwarming. When enough time has passed that you notice all these things...then enough time has passed. Awesome awesome awesome.
| BlondeWhoDenies 2/3/06 . chapter 1
I really love the wording, it is so beautiful, I love it :-)
| Jezsh 1/29/06 . chapter 1
I really like this piece...it's really delicate, gently commanding and simple. To me the imagery of the first verse sounds a bit harsh compared to the rest, but maybe it's just me. One of your best for me :)
| classic violet 1/22/06 . chapter 1
I loved this. Especially this line:
"Bleached blank smile…"
| Aquafied 1/21/06 . chapter 1
reminds me of books i used to read with old written languages only the writer knew.
its earthy, in a way. reminds me of forests in the afternoon
| Moondog Dozier 1/20/06 . chapter 1
Outstanding voice in this. "Smooth by well worn worries," a great combination of both flow and meaning. Good write.
| mizu no kokoro 1/20/06 . chapter 1
bittersweet, always waiting i can relate, good work
| a lonely september 1/20/06 . chapter 1
'as much as by the touch of a lover's caress' 'bleached blank smile' great lines in here. nice job.
| chaos called creation 1/20/06 . chapter 1
| shinku-kitsune 1/20/06 . chapter 1
You have a gift with poetic words... I can almost paint a picture for each verse. _ Well done.