Beyond beautiful. This poem almost made me cry.

this is breathtaking. the whole thing is eloquently spoken, every line is unseemingly perfect & it all just brings this distorted message to it; the death of a loved one and the other aspects that come along with it. this whole thing made me think of times when my sister was in the hostpital for this & that, especially when young, it brings me back & makes me want to cry (that or curl in a ball and hope that it won't happen again).

[basically; i love this poem so much, you have gorgeous/unrelentant talent. LOVE.]

~* noelle

It's beautiful.

It gets better. Days go by, weeks, and then months. And then you realise you're still here. Somehow, you'll get through it.

~Sarah

wow...i could never be able to stand it if any of my family died. stay strong! your brother would not have wanted you to not continue your life. you are in my thoughts, and so is your brother.

So powerful and sad.. I'm sorry to hear about what happened to your brother..

ohgod, i'm so sorry... i wish i could express through the internet how sorry i am, but i can't, so all i can do is say that i really, really hope you can get through this, & hope that you believe me. i'll keep your brother in my thoughts (i don't pray, so that's the best i can do). good luck with everything... again, i'm so sorry, & at least your brother is happier now. i'm grateful for that, & i hope you'll feel better soon. again, good luck, & i'm so sorry.

this was so beautiful, because of all the love in here. i'm so sorry, i really am. i feel so unbelievably bad i can't even describe it. i hope you're doing okay.

Very beautiful. My condolences.

STOP ** WRITING U ** **, UR WRITING SUCKS, GET OVER URSELF, GET D POINT? GO GET A LIFE U ** LOSER, DO SOMMIN ELSE WIT YASELF, LIKE GO HAVE A ** OR SOMETHING