oh wow... lockets of forever and there's nothing we hate more than being caught with a smile on our face.

gah... rei... your poetry is so great! love it!

some parts in the middle stanza confused me, but i liked this.

that was heart-breaking & oh so beautifully written ♥

breathtaking. you wove such simple imagery that hit so hard because of it. the last stanza lingered on the border of cliché, especially if we're talking about a band that didn't get somewhere, but still an amazing poem.

~kait

Wow...I found this amazing in a way I can't describe. Good Job!Tiffany

Nice the way you wove in the musical element in this piece. The third stanza does not match the same intensity as the previous two however.