good i like

I can totally relate and I love the whole string thing very cool

Clichés and all, ohIwanted to love you.-I love this; No matter how cynical we get we all just want to be a part of that cliche. We go to sleep weeping for it and we wake up screaming for it. And to sing that song (in the end it‘s the only theme that anyone sings about.) Wonderful work, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

You may want to check over your stuff for errors, I noticed a few.

Great! I really like the carefree format. Good Job!Tiffany