I loved the imagery of this one, especially because I'm thinking about the moon and all after finishing your Escaflowne trilogy.

It weaves its way around the topic/subject beautifully, like old secular chants from the medieval ages. The chant could be 3 pages of text, but the words would never refer directly to the subject. People listening would turn to each other and say, "well, OBVIOUSLY it's about the murder of Thomas a' Becket" or somesuch, but now we must work to interpret them.

Well, that metaphor would work if you didn't say the word "moon" in the first line. But I stand firmly by it!

Many thanks for writing!

beautiful. It's a mix of lovely flowing words and wonderful anagoly's. Love it. Thanks for the review, by the way.