Yay! Aycan is such a great character to write, is he not?

Quite an excellent fic.

HE CHOOSES ALIASA?

Whoa. Didn't see that coming. The choice, I mean. The fact that he actually made a decision kinda kills me.

So...constructive critisism...

I think that you could have been more forceful with the ending. A differend kind of love? That was just plain sappy. Those kinds of things don't really happen, do they? But...other than that...I like the wry humor.

Wow. I really need to go back and fix some of this. It's kind of pathetic.

But, I was tired. And, considering the time of night at which I was writing, it's pretty darn good.