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Reviews For: Butterfly
Na'rmer 2006-02-25 . chapter 1
Sweet...and simple. It has that faint smell of favorite flowers and sweet aromas of a new found love.
a lonely september 2006-01-21 . chapter 1
i whispered in your ear, 'i am your butterfly.'i love the innocence and beauty of all of that... wonderful.
les petits bateaux 2006-01-21 . chapter 1
The emotion in this was quite powerful, and very nicely put. The rhymes were great, and the imagery of the whole thing, the sea and the greens, were just sensually amazing. I enjoyed the last line the most. :)
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