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| Lith Bellmon Dann 2006-01-21 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this, you used a lot of powerful imagery. I can also find a lot of hidden meanings in here, keep up the excelent work, Lith |
| Princess-anna57 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseVery good! *gives you a cookie*, this was written well. Write on! ^_^ ~Anna~ |
| les petits bateaux 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseQuite a morbid and dark song, well, that's a pessimistic way to look at life, just what you concluded in your summary. Anyways, I liked your rhymes, but I wonder if you could extend it a bit more. Good job. |