WOW!! its me Dana. I like to say that, its really good! but go and check on fanfiction.net they have a lot off stuff in cartoons and Gorillaz is beginning very popular over there!!

i really like this story, despite the random bits of violent dialogue and other fun. 2-D is really sweet and i sometimes have trouble remembering about the characters, i'll hafta give that another look over. but grand job!!

i thought you used the verb "growling" a bit too often throughout the tale. "snarling" or "grunting" work equally well, so changing it up a bit might work better for ya.

all in all, involved tale with lots of extra OC's, i liked it a lot! even though i didn't know the backgrounds on most of your OC's, you worked them into the story in a way which didn't alienate the reader or subject him/her to long-winded descriptions. nothing more annoying than those descriptions, which should definitely be in an alphabetical rundown on top before the story begins.

thanks for sharing this with me!