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| AlphaOmegaPsi 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseOh my, this was so sad. T T And I know what you mean about the incest thing. I'm not a big fan of it myself, but for some reason all I've been inspired by is that and pedophelia (Which I'm also no usually a fan of). Ya gotta take what you can get, right? ^^ |
| ice cold hearts 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuseso sad but it was great i wish you didn't kill Jaiden though but on well nice :) |
| her portrait in black 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abusethat was so sad! i loved it your a amazing writer (add to favorites) |
| Damned Soul Of Chaos 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abusewtf this ish so wronng!1!11! 3w dats so gross i no w3 both hav problems but brothirs fing eahc othir is just so rong! even tho ur good at speling n gramarr n aldat 0ther crap if ur riting abowt this kynda stuf u got way mor problimms than mi!1 ~jessie |
| Pirate'sBlackWolfs 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseawe...its so sad. and yet, i love it! |
| Lidyah 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseYou killed him? Um - I'm so very sad now. This was quite good. |
| twilights aura 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseJust how old were the two boys? D: By the way I luved it. x3 |
| Rachizzle 2006-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse>_> this made me cry. GOOD JOB! *thumbs up* |
| Cookies and Ice Cream 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseWow. I'm speechless... That was amazing. Really well written and because of that it didn't end up trashy. I'm usually not into incest ('cause I have a brother and it just freaks me out) but that was a great story. |
| Karasu-sama 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseVery lovely. I like taboos as well, and I highly respect open-minded people who right them. You are a very, very awesome writer. I love the way that you wrote the accents. It made the dialouge play out the way it was intended to in my mind. You also made me tear up at the end. I'm still saddened and on the verge of crying. Not many people can do that to the cold hearted person that is me. Congratulations. --Raven |
| xanthofile 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseoh my effing god, i found this somewhere...and read it...and about died. it was...*stunned into silence* and then you flipped my name out there, and my heart stopped. you blew my ego way the hell up and it popped and now i'm left with this bloody but joyous ego seeping all over my once-clean hair and face. *pokes at sticky clump on the cheek* wow. just, wow. |
| Inherent 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was really, really good. Really sad but it worked. I can't help but wanting to smack them though... I mean, living room couch? They must have really wanted to get caught or something. But then I feel bad and want to hug those lovely fictional characters to death. |
| virginia giselle 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. [: Incest is best, too bad I don't have a brother or a sister. Haha! I scare myself. Well, I loved it, it was written well and the accents were adorable. |
| blessed-dragon 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseYou certainly have a thing for cranking out stories that are controversial. I really like this, though. It was kind of weird, to be honest. I've never really read boy on boy incest (I generally take one taboo at a time) but this was really good. I hope it helped you get over your writer's block. |
| kyria-asimi 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abusePoor Jai-Jai got shot by his Papa...and you never know about the Kole and Dillion thing... |