Aww, sweet poem! Yea, Shakespearean is harder to write...that's why I like writing Petrachan better...-celileona29

So sweet. I really liked this poem.

Well written. I liked the double meaning of May flowers

I really liked it... Its true in a lot of ways... Thanks for posting! Its been a delight.

i love this! so beautiful, especially the line 'Our lives aren't measured by the breaths we take,/But by times our breath is taken away.' gorgeous work.

Wow! Just wow! That was really sweet. I liked the repetition and stuff.