loved it!

*applause!!*

Freakin' awesome ending.

Over and out,

:D CD

wowthat was a nice end...*sniff sniff* COLLETTE!

oh

i wish u luck on your writing

that was really good:) and no quitting! ts toogood for you to quit!!

luv hellx

NO! DON'T ABANDON THIS!!

I love this twists. Rose is HIS?? and the last one was a Sanders too?

GAH!!

:) CD

WHAT THE HECK DO YOU MEAN, "THIS SUCKS"??

it SO does not suck. there is action, there is suspense (who ARE these "others"?) there is problem resolution.

I LIKE this.

:D CD

Pugz, this chapter does not suck! Alot happened that contributed to your plot in the story, although I do understand what you mean in that there wasn't very much action in this chapter... but with the plot that you have, I'm sure there will be plenty more action to come- and very soon, too! Keep on writing and have fun with it!:)!

**Heart of the RubyFire**

nah it didn't totally suck

i wishu luck on your writing

No shaeli, sherlock. ANYway... oo!! *rubs hands* sweetness! I love the lines these two trade.

What next??

:) CD

yep jacob is stupid for keeping it all to himself...really shitass brainless.

i wish u luck on your writing

please update soon

Yikes! What will happen next?!?! I wondered whether or not you would bring him back- you're right, he's such a good bad guy!! How will Pete, Sally, Emma, and Jacob react to this I wonder?! Life sure is throwing some tough obstacles at Collette right now! You've got me on the absolute edge of my seat, please update again soon!

**Heart of the RubyFire**

Yay! youre back!

YOU!! *attacks James*

I take it that HE's... *snarl*

:) CD

james got a promotion! NOT

OK anyways sanders is back and because of that no one will believe her about him when it comes to the school and he probably will try to get her away from her uncle.

man this means shit

please update soon

i wish u lcuk on your writing!