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Reviews For: The simple pleasures of the sky

the-foresight
2007-02-27
ch 1,
abuseCocoa for the soul, great line and really a very good poem.
Moondog Dozier
2006-01-31
ch 1,
abuseWow, the sound aspects of this are great. This is so lyrically spectacular. Good write.
FunkyFlower17
2006-01-27
ch 1,
abusethis is brilliant! the pink icing sky bit and the way u combined nature with ur thoughts is amazing! absolutely beautiful! i also luv the rhyming at the beginning. u mite wanna work on the middle, but otherwise, awesome as always!

~mez~
The Moribund Marionette
2006-01-21
ch 1,
abuseGorgeous production here!! I am impressed. :)
button-nose
2006-01-21
ch 1,
abusei loved the references to pink icing! "a whirl of pink icing" i though thtis was very girlie and gave me a bouncy feeling..i liked the use of imagery in this.. i liked gentle glow of the snow.. hot cocoa for the soul...words flying off my weak pencil led... amongst others i thought they were imaginitive and i admire your understanding in this... simple pleasures of the sky...never really looked at them but oh how my eyes are opened!

keep it coming!

Button Nose x x
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