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| the-foresight 2007-02-27 ch 1, | abuseCocoa for the soul, great line and really a very good poem. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseWow, the sound aspects of this are great. This is so lyrically spectacular. Good write. |
| FunkyFlower17 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abusethis is brilliant! the pink icing sky bit and the way u combined nature with ur thoughts is amazing! absolutely beautiful! i also luv the rhyming at the beginning. u mite wanna work on the middle, but otherwise, awesome as always! ~mez~ |
| The Moribund Marionette 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous production here!! I am impressed. :) |
| button-nose 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abusei loved the references to pink icing! "a whirl of pink icing" i though thtis was very girlie and gave me a bouncy feeling..i liked the use of imagery in this.. i liked gentle glow of the snow.. hot cocoa for the soul...words flying off my weak pencil led... amongst others i thought they were imaginitive and i admire your understanding in this... simple pleasures of the sky...never really looked at them but oh how my eyes are opened! keep it coming! Button Nose x x |