I'd like to say we have something of the same opinion, but really, everyone has their own take on late night, one of the things that make it such a creative-sparking time, fabulous read, and I don't see how the format is messed up because the solidarity of it gives the reader some hedgeway to kinda detail it for them specifically, I don't think I need to say it, but say it I will: Great Job!

it's beautifully written.. i like it a lot

Wow, awesome poem! _ Excellent! Write on!

Anna