wow. i dont know what to say anymore. but i read. and i liked.

these metaphors and similies are awesome.. amazingly done

my grape soda fender.

man, jeremy is getting some serious exposure. fabulous K. bense, it's been a pleasure.

That whole line dedicated to "we" just spoke to me, the structure of it is so visual and mm.

Nie work.

love the imagery- comparisons of the two, apart and together. love how you find poetry in the small mundane things.

Beautiful. So much wonderful imagery.