I've come close to feeling this way...but not this...lost or whatever... And I don't think I could write about it if I did. I don't think I could write about my pain this well now.

I love this story because I know it's something really close and personal to you and it just makes it a more emotional read. Great job as always. Can't wait for more.

Love xox Lain

hearthbreaking chapter! your words are so powerful and direct...you know i think that everyone wants to be normal, everyone wants to show their normality- it's only a question of appearances...but what is really normality? "normal" people are worse because they only think about appearances and social integration. they are so intolerant about "weird" people; i find "weird" people more original and interesting than the average citizens! the average citizens are so boring and annoying...

My friend came out to his best friend in...I don't remember what grade because I'm a bad friend that way...and yeah...I don't know if he's talked to him since. Meh...anyway.

Poor Gavin. :( He needs a full blown bubble bath, some hot chocolate, and a kitten. Seriously. And a hug.

Kirk needs to grow up.

I need to pee.

I've had to pee a lot today...

Love xox

everybody is so cruel and heartless! how can somoene who's supposed to be your best friend can do that? for me, it's not really a deep friendship...but perhaps I'm a bit naive...perhaps there are not true friends...aw...I feel depressed! you evil evil author! i'm depressed because of you! anyways i won't blame you any further since your story has really some potential! so update soon! please?

Terrific ending! you know I find always strange that americans are so religious (going to church during every sunday and other things)but it's because it's not like that in france. and then, I'm also an atheist and I have my own belief. everybody is different...I'm just curious about that...uniqueness

this chapter is so sincere and so sad. I think your descriptions are really interesting and sometimes poetic...

I like your writing since it flows quite nicely and clearly...and there's also a kind of sensibility present in your style! good start!

Wow, powerful and emotional chapter! I can relate to exactly what Gavin is going through. Update as soon as possible! :D

I want to beat up Mia. RAWR! I guess I could understand if she was upset but she went all uber **...uber ** hehe i like that...

sighs...poor gavin...

love xox

Aw... :(

Well...I really love your writing style. It's just really easy to read and really easy to get sucked into.

I love the part where everything that had caused smiles or happiness suddenly caused pain...I thought it was really strong...love it.

LOVE YOU! har har har...

love xox

Wow, I'm loving this story so far. I can relate to this SO mcuh!

A great start to what is no doubt going to be a wonderful story!

Seems to be moving very fast. I don't know about you, but I would think that the average teenage boy wouldn't decide his sexuality based on one fantasy. He would probably dismiss it at first, deny it, blame it on his fluctuating hormones, not accept it in a heartbeat. Other than that, this was written well.

I think you've captured his fear very well. It's easy for the reader to feel for what Gavin feels because of the way you've written it. Great work, and I look forward to more!

Aw...

:hugs gavin and you:

I can't wait to read more of this. You're a great writer...it's so easy to read this because of how good your grammar (i almost wrote grandma...whoa) is and just how well everything flows. So update soon, yes?

Love xox