You've officially left me speechless.

this is perfect. like... absolutely beautiful. i can't really say anything else. especially the 2nd stanza. ...wow. favorited.

the religious references made me a bit speechless, i'd rather not go into that, but otherwise, it was extremely beautifully written. awesome.

Very poignant picture painted. Loved the descriptive phrasing. If there was a point beyond the picture of a fallen angel, then I missed it, but it was very good.