This is just really, really cool.

This was a fabulous poem, but I can't help but recognise the line(s)

"i'm just the onewith sharpie poetry on her jeans"

Beautifully phrased and used, but reminds me SO MUCH of Elise in Jodi Picoult's 'Vanishing Acts.' Have you read it? Great book.

And wonderful poem.

x x x

"i'm just your little emo girl".. i loved how blatant and honest it was. those last two lines i hear as a whisper, almost threatening...

love this one. it's got that little somthing to it.

Wonderful, i love this line "But the love lines are outof style right? I'm just your little emo girl, i'm just the one with sharpie poetry on her jeans"I can't help but , beautiful

That is so beautiful...

this is really pretty. How cold and elegant.

Love it. As always. The scissor metaphor makes me happy.

[I'm getting a new phone at some point this month. I'll let you know when. E-mail me or something; I haven't heard from you since probably December. ( ]

this is so sexy, flitrting, brilliant-no words. love, love that; "burn for me, won't you?" i just giggled finding that line terribly amusing, the last line too is quite good too. it is painful, dark & sort-of erotic, you twist it and molded it into what is now. & that is fabulous.

[man...i am so behind in my reviews. sorry.]

* noelle

Holy SHIT! I love this!

Sexy flirting with danger. A lovely combination. I love the seductiveness of 'burn for me, won't you?'. And the ending is wonderfully satisfying.

god, it's beautiful. the feeling of lack of safety makes me feel shitty inside.

Nice job with the imagery here; good stuff.

This was glorious. Short but intellegent and really # beautiful.

i can't quite say a favorite part because all of it is my favorite part.