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lackluster 1/22/06 . chapter 1tragic, like it was made just for these words. "burn for me, won't you?" it signifies so much. |
notACTUALLYwriting 1/22/06 . chapter 1"with sharpie poetry on her jeans" ha. |
account not in use 1/21/06 . chapter 1this is where i am right now. beautiful & painful, starts out sort-of erotic, dark, you think you know hwat's going ot happen, and then you twist it. i love it. |
AnAlterEgoName 1/21/06 . chapter 1seems a little step by i adore the last line. oh, oh. sharpie poetry |
chaos called creation 1/21/06 . chapter 1Very beautiful. My favourite line was 'but love lines are out of style, right?' Good work |
rocket baby doll 1/21/06 . chapter 1this is clever and brilliant.. good job! |