The story is very detailed in its descriptions, almost like JRR Tolkien's novels. The characters are well defined and the sentences flow very smoothly. A good deal of writers use short sentences as if they don't know what a comma is for.

Very wonderful to see something of this high quaility on fictionpress. Hope to see an update from you soon.

at first i wasnt gonna review cause i am his wife, But decide instead i want to give say here of how great it is and how he almost done with chap2 and add him to my favorite list! ;)

It is very vivid in detail and i personally do love how it is written. Keep up the awesome work!