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| Daydream Nation 2008-03-29 ch 7,  | abuseIt's a beautiful, beautiful story. |
| dominic+leo 2008-02-07 ch 6, | abusewhen are you going to update? |
| dominic+leo 2007-11-13 ch 7, | abuseAH! WHAT... HAPPENS...NEXT...? (Hits you with random blue flying flamingo penguin whore). TELL... ME! i promise i won't tell the others. please? well i'll guess i'll just have to wait for you to post the next chapter. i do have a few questions if you don't mind answering. One: why are they all comando and such? i understad that Shayde was tormented and teased when he was younger, but what's the deal with Kallum? two: What's with the who anarchist satianist i want to shoot up my school like Columbine thing,and finally three:... well i don't have a third question, but things need to be in threes so... How are you?... |
| Venustas iaceo 2007-10-21 ch 7, | abuseI motherfuckin' love this story. Why aren't you writing it, bitch? :lovelovelove: |
| nonaccount 2007-07-22 ch 7, | abuseAw, very sweet ending for the chapter. Frankly I'm surprised Shayde was able to restrain himself from smashing that creepy clock for as long as he did. Those back-and-forth eyes are mind-numbingly disturbing. |
| cupxofxfools 2007-05-10 ch 7, | abuseOh my. Seeing this updated makes my life. |
| GASPtrinitrotoluene 2007-05-09 ch 7, | abuseYAY i really love this story. not only is the plot creative but the characters are well thought out ^_^ i really really enjoyed reading this and i hope there is much more to come. man.. i wish i was shadow spirits. anyway EXCELLENT JOB! |
| GASPtrinitrotoluene 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abusegood stuff! cant wait to read more! |
| NaraOccult 2007-05-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseCute! I love particularly how he blatantly ignores his mother, but also how he runs his hands through Shayde's hair. |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-05-04 ch 7, | abuseOh wow! You updated! I really loved this chapter and it was so sweet towards the end. It was really great! Keep up the good work! -DBD |
| Kaysin 2007-05-04 ch 7, | abuseNew chapter! With fluff! Thank you! I completely adore this story, and I am so glad you didn't drag out the will-they-won't-they with Kallum and Shayde. I probabaly don't have to say how much I love those two characters. I don't really have anything to say, other than thank you for updating and I can't wait for the next one. |
| channingcaughtfire 2007-05-03 ch 7, | abuse:) I'm extremely interested in how this will play out. I really like the line "Even the sheep can hear the sound of the devil's laughter." |
| Amindaya 2007-05-03 ch 7, | abuseAw, so sweet. I'm so glad this has been updated. |
| d'Neronique 2007-02-08 ch 6, | abuseThis story has a kind of monochromatic goodness. That's the best way I can describe it, I don't know. It came highly recommended to me. The best part is how they can get bits of the future, selectively. Yeah, that's pretty badass. |
| Venustas iaceo 2007-01-22 ch 6, | abuseMath homework = bad things. You said you wanted me to review, so here it is. I LOVEZ KALLUM KILRAIN cause he's one crazy muthafucka. Cuddles. I like cuddles. Canoodles next chapter! I love Shayde's breakdown. I'm glad you tried twice because this verison is a lot better. Well, I have no clue what I was going to say just then after that. Anyways, Kallum and Shayde, I want them. WRITE KAYLEE WRITE or I will cry. Like a baby. Not really. Just pout a lot. Tootles and canoodles, Alysha |