beautiful... you are such a talented writer.

keep it upEm

sweetly written. 'sinner boy' so many times... lovely.

I know who that's about! =P hah

good job as always!

Very interestingly written. I thought it was quite well done. Good job.

I like the talking to the person, calling them sinner boy. Great, the emotions really stick out.

Would it be better as 'the color of your eyes'? The phrase sinner boy is very catchy. Nicely portrayed.