this is so beautiful
i just love it

wow :| "they’ll think the 350 miles of telephone wire/acted as a noose and stopped our breathing/since we never made it down to the smashed red car/where they found your pretty face on that stunning body"

i can't really explain it but... it's ** amazing. really.

Very intriging, I really like it. I have to agree, morbid and humorous all in one. "But I'll just call it sight-seeing." My favorite line. Can't wait to read more.~Megs

last line was great. nice job with this.

Rei... something you're not telling me...?

just kidding. wonderful as usual.

Slightly morbid and humorous, I love the sense of silent desperation, being covered up by that evillness inside. Very, very well done. *applauds*

The ending is strong and bitter. Great job on showing how the human mind is working these days.