just want to say in ur review of my story u were very mean and i am not nine. and ne is not a word

OHH! I LOVE IT! it gave me shivers... anywho...you deserve a hug this is truely wonderful!

This is a very good poem and I like the images you paint.

m... i love it! very nice, very nice indeed, i love the way you use the words the way they flow to an off beat...and make me shiver...

Ms.Thorn

Quite a dark way to look at dark, or a pessimistic way to look at it. Though I personally think that the dark is a way to just calm down and a bunch more other emotions, but yes, this is well done. :)

Interesting. I like it.