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| Narijima 2006-08-03 ch 1,  | abuseNicely done! I enjoy the emotion behind the poem, as well as the sentiment. Simple on the surface, yet it goes so much deeper. Amazing. |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abusepowerful and awesome piece |
| cornered.sensations 2006-02-03 ch 1, | abusevery interesting...i really liked this. |
| les petits bateaux 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI guess intelligence isn't all that now, is it? I love the mist that you associated with a cage, or being trapped. Very lovely touch. :D |
| BJ Worth 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting poem of pain and genius. Liked the descriptions. |