Dont give up, wait for it... wait for it...

I like how this flows. It keeps you reading and isnt boring. Good job.

Once again amazing metaphors, language and imagery. There was one part in this that really stood out to me -

"They say I'm so talented,why then am I batting .0for the season of love?Why, When I'm so "loveable"do all my relationships fail likeNapoleon at Waterloo?"

You protray powerful emotions in your poetry.

Take care and keep writing,EB

The baseball references contribute well to the overall concept here. The emotion is evident, and the self-exploration that comes out helps the ending seem somewhat realistic. A well written work, because it thrusts so much together and wraps it all together well.

great similes. more woe, i see. hope things work out (not being sarcastic for once).