I think what I like so much about this story is the fact that unlike so many other fic characters, when ** happens to her, she doesn't just spazz out and run off crying, she's stays around and fights it off. And I'm really impressed as to what you've done with this story and i absolutely love it :D

xx
Ali

Aw I really liked it. But I was kind of hoping that Jen and Timmy got together oh well. Good ending though.

Okay that got me confused when you didn't mention Dev's name at all and then I read the AN and was liked what the heck did I miss so I went and read the one shot and that cleared up all my confusion.
I really enjoyed this story and the characters a lot.
I would have to say that I would have been happy if they stayed together but I'm not unhappy with the alternative. They were both great guys and both really cared for her. So its all good.

Wow...
I mean, at the beggining of the story I was really into it but as it neared the end it got WAY to cliche for my liking and Devon was ONE confused character. One minute he liked her the next he didn't. I think this could've been alot better if you put more time and effort into it, not saying that you didn't. I was just really dissapointed.

That was a really good story but im really confused about 2 things:
1)i dont get what happened after the drunk incident still
2)i dont get the epilogue even after reading that extra sequel, like what happened?

aw...that's so cute!
So happy that they got married :D
Thank you for such a cool story

between this an the explaining oneshot/sequel this has all been amazing.. you really know how to jam pack it all in there.. never a boring moment/chapter.. well done i loved it! XD

"Drunken chimpanzee!" bea.u.ti.ful.

Now on to actual serious comments: very original plot, you've managed to take the "falling for your best friend" cliche to a different level. I like that you keep to Jennifer's point of view (going back and forth, while very informative, is very confusing, and really, who knows what's going on in the minds of guys to be able to quote them like that while actually sounding like a guy?). I also like that Jennifer sounds very real, she's quirky and has flaws.

in summary, nice job! hope to see more of your work!

omg totally loved it
heaps good story
i waz so angry when he waz being a dick 2 her
but im so glad he liked her all along
ah xx

This was a really ** story. The plot line is extremely overdone and your writing style is that of a 10 year old kid. Very choppy and rough. Your attempts at sarcasm were not very funny. I read about 2 chapters and felt like I was reading a 6th graders creative writing assignment. You really need to work on your writing.

i am sofreakingwrong.. hah!

before i head off to the rest of the sotry.. let me guess.. timmy is gay? and is robert's bf? that is why he's an exception? *crosses my fingers*

Dev is an a*hole

But istill want him with Jen.. i just want him to suffer.. lol

nice story!

I really hate it when people do things like that. I mean tell you that they are crushing on your boyfriend just because "they thought you had to know". that's just "peachy". really, a line "get a life" fits here perfectly.
pretty good story so far, I'll continue reading it

I like the story line so far, although I have only read the first chapter so far. There are, however, some inconsistencies that indicate a possible POV change before your publishing.

"Before you get me wrong, let me clarify. Devon and I were good friends…way back in seventh grade. Then he started dating Marissa. Marissa Monroe (how did she end up with a KK name? Weirdo…) took and immediate dislike to me, the best friend. Naturally, Devon and I fought over it and he, being the pig-headed, stubborn imbecile that he was, chose Marissa over her.

He never got over their fight and she never got over her hatred of him. Now, here they were, her a junior, him a senior, still fighting. Still hating. And I still liked him."

-"how did she end up with a KK name?" --> what does that mean?
-"chose Marissa over her." --> chose Marissa over me (?), right? She's writing in the first person in her diary
-"He never got over their fight and she never got over her hatred of him. Now, here they were, her a junior, him a senior, still fighting. Still hating. And I still liked him." --> did you mean "I never got over my hatred of him" ? Again, written in third person. Similarly, "Now, here WE ARE, ME a junior, him a senior, still fighting..."

I hope you don't take these the wrong way. I am only trying to give a little constructive criticism because I like your idea over all. These corrections were just at the very beginning of the story and were very distracting to me.