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| classic violet 2006-02-26 ch 1, | you have such beauty in your poems, this is spectacular. so well done, ohmgod; beautiful! |
| breezy nostrils 2006-02-11 ch 1, | aw sad last lines. but i like the first stanza. in fact, i heart it. haha...nice work! |
| brokendreams21 2006-01-27 ch 1, | Hm. Interesting title choice. 'Moonshine madness'. That line is just plain awesome. Totally my favourite. And the last line is also really good. (I like stars!) Awesome job! |
| lackluster 2006-01-22 ch 1, | something about this is special, in such a glorious way. "may they be used for fuel?"-amazing line. |
| eighteen hundred 2006-01-22 ch 1, | Amazing. A couple lines in there that just really, really worked. Good good stuff. |