I'm reviewing cuz I adore this story, but cuz I'm reading on my itouch, don't expect more! LOL my fingers are hurting.

Anyway, it's cute how David is so... Mature? I dunno. But phillip brings out a different side of him.

Oh!! I like it, alot(:
The characters are amazingly well written! :D

I just finished your story, and enjoyed it very much.

Cutest thing ever! I love it. Slow at first, but then it got really nice. I absolutely adore Philip and David. Much, much love and adoration.

oh this was delightful!

You know, I was planning on making this a studious, work-filled evening when I found this lovely gem of a story. Okay, so some parts were a wee bit rushed, but I liked how you made it more like scenes from their lives together as opposed to every-chapter-follows-the-next, yawn-yawn-yawn.

The only critique I have to make is when you make references to sexual preference, which I'm fairly certain is only a 20th-century concept.

oh my... I love this story...very much !
it's one of my favorite...'coz im a certified YAOI lover...!
great job !

Hah. A few parts are ridiculously dramatic, but it's a really cute and witty story anyway.

Totally awesome story :D
Loved it!

Yes, a corny ending, but it seemed suitable. The story was quite dark and sad so a happy happy ending was nice. It was really surprising to me that Katie had not accepted them from the start. I was convinced she wouldn't mind. Then she saw them after their first time. As if that wasn't enough Philip's father walked in on them on their second morning together. I amused myself imagining that they are cursed from now on and every time after they make love somebody is doomed to find them.
Oh... I really loved Owens the groom. :)

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This story was wonderful. I loved the way it was written, the language, the accuracy of important points, and the steadiness of the character's personality. I can’t wait to read your other stories.

My heart swells with joy! I just loved this story. Just enough troubles, just enough emo-ness, just enough risquè-ness. It was great! I am excited to read your other things, and since i love your writing so well i also hope that your life is treating you well. Adieu!

I don't usually review completed works until the end, but why does the sister have to be a prick! Damn! I hate homophibic **! Okay, just ranting. Great story, BTW. :)

ah cutest story ever ^_^

Great story! I really love it :) It was so interesting and your characters are amazing. I'm so glad that at the end, after so much angst they did have their happy ending :) Like I said before, thanks for sharing this with us! :D