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| button-nose 2006-01-22 ch 1,  | abusei liked this...i thought you told the story very well and the theme intended was put across in a great discriptive way. i liked the emotion in this... i particulary liked this vers: Your fingertips painting a picture onto meI being your new found easelA masterpiece in your hands thought it was nicely written and had a certain edge to it that i loved...great! button nose x x |