Reviews for Outside with you - FictionPress.com

mystic-georgia 2006-01-22 ch 1,	abuseTwo words.Pathetic fallacy. Which I think you've captivated us very well we these delightful (but slightly -=ahem=- erotic) images. Overall, lovely.
button-nose 2006-01-22 ch 1,	abusei liked the different format on this i thought the bold writing was a nice change! i love the way you use imagery to potray your emotions in this its great! i also loved the last two lines...fab Button nose x x