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Outside with you
mystic-georgia
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
Two words.Pathetic fallacy. Which I think you've captivated us very well we these delightful (but slightly -=ahem=- erotic) images.
Overall, lovely.
button-nose
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
i liked the different format on this i thought the bold writing was a nice change! i love the way you use imagery to potray your emotions in this its great! i also loved the last two lines...fab
Button nose x x
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