Reviews for Black Ballet Shoes

Reviews For: Black Ballet Shoes

A Midsummer Nights Sacrifice 2006-05-16 . chapter 1

I like the rhymes and the metaphores, it's really good I like the whole swan with a broken neck.

~Me~

degenerate elite rabbit 2006-03-08 . chapter 1

i want to stay a kid forever to! awesome piece yet again.

chaos called creation 2006-01-22 . chapter 1

'A graceful swan/With a broken neck.' is a striking line. Great job on the rhyming, well written.

Faithless Juliet 2006-01-22 . chapter 1

I love the imagery of the black ballet shoes - gorgeous, absolutely amazing. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.