beautful and smooth rythym. Would be very catchy as a jingle XD just kidding

I like the idea and your quoting Marilyn Monroe in the first line, but I didn't feel that the style in which you wrote it added anything to this. The rhyming is pretty good, but your rhythm is off: "a SMILE apPEARS upON her FACE / [pause] WHICH fills UP the EMPty SPACE." It sounds stilted to read. But I like the idea and the last couplet, quite nice. )

Very pretty. I especially love the title. Great poem!

It's nice to see something from you again Olympia. :) This poem isn't too bad really, when I saw the summery I thought it wasn't going to be much good. But it's pretty good.

That poem was really pretty! I'm so glad you finally wrote something again! _ I'm glad you're ok, too! I've missed talking to you, and if I just wasn't a procrastinator, lol, I'd e-mail you, which I WILL, mark my words, I'm thinking on doing it in a few minutes, so wait for it! lol Pretty, pretty poem, I should try to do a calligram too! _

i like glee. the rhymes are very elementary and forced.