I liked the story, though I might at times though it was overdramatic and angsty. On the other hand, the drama and angst are well done (and perfect for when you feel like reading it).

I was hoping you'll explain Rei's job better. Was he a former prostitute now turned pimp? When did he work? Shouldn't he have been out most nights, including the weekend? I would asume prostitutes are quite in demand during weekends (or at least no less than any other day), so the pimp should be there with them. I suppose I might find out about this in the sequel. Gonna go check if there is one :)

I really liked this story! It kind of reminds me of Gravitation for some reason, although Unbreakable is much more angsty of course xD I like Rei, he's evil sometimes but caring as well. And I love Sho! I just love him. He's cute, the drama and angst and all that. Also he's a kid, he can cry:P Although I'd probably kill him if he was a real person...xD I'm really glad the alternate ending isn't the actual ending - it was written beautifully but I love the sequel with Sho much better:) That said I'm off to read the sequel!

OMg the alternative ending is so sad (burst in more tears) but so bittersweet(I like it thou)

(tears) T.T...I don't want Rei to move but he wants to run away. Its true that running away would hurt sho the most

NO I don't want Rei to move. Rei makes Sho what he is...T.T(hugs sho again)

(hugs sho) I understand why Rei doesn't want to be hurt anymore T.T..

Did Rei do something bad? I feel bad for Sho. I know how it feels when everyone bad at you

wow. They do seem like best friends but I guess drinking can damage you mind alot

wow. His friend doesn't alot of things when he's drunk.

Laz seems like a happy go-lucky brother XD

aw. this chapter is so cute(expect the part where Rei freaked out)

The stres is adding up for Sho T.T...Not good. I think he has some depression but not alot

Rei wants it Sho to sleep with him even with out this. Smoking is bad so I don't get why Rei wants sho to do it o.o

how could you bring hope like that to sho and not understand yourself -.-

Sho is really confused. Not good and Rei isn't helping

Sho should say something if he's afraid. I want to give him a big hug