Yay! Yet another good chapter! I really do feel sorry for Sho, you portray his feelings very well. It makes him seem pathetic in a good way. Wow, I don't say that often. Anyway, good job on this chapter! Update the next one soon!

Not one flame yet, huh...well, don't be expecting one anytime soon- this story is fabulous! (You actually had me on the edge of my seat there for awhile...hehe). As always, your character development is amazing, and my heart goes out to Sho.

And yes, NOT your typical angst story.

Looking foward to more.

Guess my imagary is helped with the drawings I've seen. Very well written and very emotional. I can really see Sho and Rei when I am reading your chapters.

This chapter was very well written. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to the next chapter. You keep surprising me with the subject matter. :-) But oh well, I do enjoy reading your work.

I enjoyed the depth of this chapter. Lots of emotion and understanding of what he is going through. You write this so clear and in a way readers can relate. Good Chapter.

This has to be one of the worst days at work ever! nothing is going right for him. and his boss is a bastard. but Shelly is nice but it seems in like a hey i work with ya we shoudl be work friends to get through the night. i like how SHo is begining to see that Rei is no savior just a regular person. i like the way you put the last sentance...nice. keep it up chica. sorry this one took longer than the others.

That was depressing, in a good way, of course. (if there is a good side to being depressed) I've been feeling a bit down lately; it's nice to know that someone feels the same. xP.. Though I suppose I'm just acting a bit mean-spirited. xD That's one pretty mean boss... reminds me a bit of one of the jerks at my school. xP

another good chapter! yay! though i do feel sorry for sho...poor guy...keep up the good work! woot woot!

I almost stopped reading it on the first paragraph...it seemed like one of those typical angst stories- SO glad I didn't. You did an excellent job on character and story development, and my heart ached for Sho. Can't wait to read more!

-dreamcatcher33

I like how you add in little memories about his old friends and how they use to be. I also like your description of Rei thorughout the story. I still feel like there should be alittle more of Sho though but that could be coming in later chapters. Sho seems clumsy. he's always falling or tripping :) and the Oriental Carpet what exactly is that? cause knowing me i thought it was a store for carpets then i read if he was going to be singing. so is it like a bar of some sort? well im done for now. keep it up chica.

Rei's starting to seem so evil, leading Sho on like that. xD... It's cute though, this chapter. No complaints here.

As amusing as it was in the beginning of this chapter, it turned pretty sad afterwards... That was really great! Um... I'm not trying to be sadistic or something and take pain in other people's pain. I just mean that your writing was really heartfelt here... I wanted to pat the poor kid's shoulder and beat up those guys for him.

Getting interesting.. hm..

Huh... I hadn't expected this to be another slash. (I just randomly clicked another story after moving from this other one.) It seemed kind of awkward right at the end, but I suppose that's intentional. Other than that, your writing was detailed and nice. This seems really sweet so far. D

You have developed much in this chapter! Your language and description are awesome here! And it's actually starting to look like something.I sure hope he takes his shoes off...BWAHAHAHA the ending MWAAHHAHAHAHHA...