this is sweet!! it made me smile.

Beautiful. I don't really know what else to say. I think the shortness of it just emphasises the importance. Fab!

This is great! I love the simplicity of it.

Beautiful, one can picture the person through your description. The (half)rhymes work nicely as well.

this one really make me smile, just cute...

keep it writing

this made me smile.

aw guitar.so beautiful.

nice

lovely.

Wonderful tone and description in this. The portrait of the person comes across mysteriously clear.

You rhymed stars and guitars. lol my simple mind is still in awe of that. Amazing job on this.

beautiful poem; the ryhmes are superbly excellant and not at all flat, they do not pester or annoy, nor sound forced. this is beautiful, beautiful.

~* noelle