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| laughing in her sleep 2006-07-03 ch 1,  | abusethis is sweet!! it made me smile. |
| believe-in-happiness 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I don't really know what else to say. I think the shortness of it just emphasises the importance. Fab! |
| yesssssss 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! I love the simplicity of it. |
| Eirien 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, one can picture the person through your description. The (half)rhymes work nicely as well. |
| In State of Agony 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abusethis one really make me smile, just cute... keep it writing |
| a lonely september 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abusethis made me smile. |
| AnAlterEgoName 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseaw guitar.so beautiful. nice |
| Nacilme 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuselovely. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWonderful tone and description in this. The portrait of the person comes across mysteriously clear. |
| chaos called creation 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseYou rhymed stars and guitars. lol my simple mind is still in awe of that. Amazing job on this. |
| poetic abortion 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abusebeautiful poem; the ryhmes are superbly excellant and not at all flat, they do not pester or annoy, nor sound forced. this is beautiful, beautiful. ~* noelle |