Woah, very dark. It seems to have a very tainted feel to it. Anyway it is a great poem, reminds you that for every bit of light, there is also a shadow.

Great poem! I love this. Oh, and I agree about the movie. They got gore and sex happy, lol. I was expecting more story like they did in the first one. Anyhow, nice work.

Wow... the imagination really flies with this poem. I love it!!

I really, really like this poem Claire-chan! It's propably one of your best yet!

Very nice - I like the gradual way that it evolved - the image of being born in the darkness and those last few verses really combined for a greater effect. I saw Underworld last Friday and loved it, just as good if not better then the original. Great job with this, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.