I see you ignored my request to join the dark side. Perhaps you do not yet know your full powah.

Anyway, this poem would be brilliant if you didn't end it with a preposition. A complete lack of grammarial skills is not tolerated here in the fortress of evil.

-Shadow (complete with yellow eyes)

tass realy cute i like it it expresses a lot

This made me smile. I like the analogy. I like how you made it clear with the kissing the father bit, and the word "reluctantly." And the word "lonely" in the last stanza.. how you described the wind as lonely instead of the night, as a more straightforward writer might have. (I mean that in a good way.) I really really like this poem. =)

i like this! especially the first two stanzas. great analogy!