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simpleplan13
2006-03-18
ch 1,
I like it... love the repition at the end... nice message too
mizu no kokoro
2006-02-27
ch 1,
it has a rather catchy beat to it... hm... good work

keep writing!
FunkyFlower17
2006-01-27
ch 1,
love the beginning, but i'm not so sure about the ending...i think that needs a little work. cuz at the beginning it's like there's a rhyme scheme starting but it sort of evapourates after one or two lines. otherwise, great job! i love the hurrying sorta pace throughout and the repetition at the end just emphasises the point. keep writing,

~mez~
TiEka Koniku
2006-01-24
ch 1,
interesting. that would be kinda cool to set to music. but what type of music? let me know. ttyl. -hugs- *TI*
Vexed and Tired
2006-01-23
ch 1,
Nice, I wanted to write something like this but I couldn't do it without making it sound really corny. I'm so glad you did a better job than I did.
shinco
2006-01-22
ch 1,
Hey, Shazaam, you should make that into music! That would be great! It would be awesome! Maybe I could help you... MAYBE, lol Nice one, like it lots! GO SHAZAAM!
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