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| Casey Drake 2006-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseAn interesting story. My suggestion is to decide on a rhythm and keep to it--this is a little... erratic. Otherwise... cool. :) CD |
| Icedragn 2006-01-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked what I read of it but it's so long. I wrote a review, just for you! ^-^ |