Reviews for Chocolate Covered Caramel

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Asia Ralaia Schiegoh 2007-01-30 ch 1,	abuseI don't really enjoy reading slashes, but this one was way too cute to pass up. And I love caramel with my chocolate! How'd ya know? (giggle) Thanks for commenting my 'Mother of the Heir' story! ~ARS
Xxnever-knewxX 2007-01-20 ch 1,	abuseChocolate covered caramel? hmm...Now I want to try some... Anywhoo, that was so cute, I loved it :D
MlleKathy 2006-12-24 ch 1,	abuseAw... your story is so cute! I wish you would write more!
EeeNAce 2006-10-22 ch 1,	abuseCute!! I usually don't read slash, but I decided to check yours out XDD. I must say that I definitely don't regret it. It's quite an original concept and I think that it would have been really nice if you expanded on it. It's very well written and I do hope to read more of your works in the future.
kristalyn 2006-10-04 ch 1,	abuseThis story is absolutely adorable. I think I scared my roommate when I was reading it, because I kept saying, "aw!" Now I want some caramels:)
Derek57 2006-08-30 ch 1,	abusebig grin I was impressed with how you set out this story; you set the scene extremely well. Prehaps a little more physical description is required, but otherwise, it gave you a good insight to his surrounds to a pleasing extent. Well done. Beautiful imagary of the two characters too. I'm unsure about the names, but it fitted in well with the whole "sweet" aspect of the story. I'll admit, it made me giggle. However, not being a critic, but I felt the whole scene with his mate just literally popping out of nowhere in the alley way was a little...quick. Maybe we could have had a deeper insight to his curiosity? I don't know. It just felt as though there were a few "gaps". But I guess as this is just a one-shot, it's not really a big deal. It's just the general story that counts. Other wise, well written and I don't mean to sound like a critic...(which I often manage to do). The characters for this have sparked my interest and I hope you continue using them. It would be advisable to let us know a little more about them too! They sound so cute. Well done, you have my support! Hopefully you will write a proper novel with the characters? Ne? lol. Best of luck. Derek x x x
BrokenandBleeding 2006-08-12 ch 1,	abuseO, chocolate covered caramel eh...lol, after reading this story, I think I like the combination too XD. Hope you write more on this couple--it's adorable. :3 Oh, and thank you for reviewing my sotry Bows And yes, I will be writing more Yaoi stories with Vincent and Ian-->.> some more...I dunno, graphic, maybe?
FlamingDoritos 2006-08-05 ch 1,	abuseYEAY! This rocks! I found a grand total of: 1 spelling mistake. Hurrah! Sorry, I'm just being mean. This was well-written, and I think that I sound like a critic. So I'll stop. ^__^ Yaoi rocks. And I love their names. It WORKS! Hehe...although I doubt that listening to the song 'I'm Too Sexy' was a good idea while reading this...because now it'll be jammed in my head all day like a fat man between a parked SUV and a moderately priced pet store. Sigh...ah, well. You win some, you lose some. And having this stuck in my head is NOT a bad thing. ^__^ I'm glad you liked My Immortal; it's the only thing I can write right now. Everything else has fallen asleep...but YAOI IS THE SOLUTION TO ALL PROBLEMS! ^_^ Yeah, I'll leave you alone now. I'm the only TRULY annoying person out there, so everyone needs a turn!
Cedric Kale 2006-07-29 ch 1,	abusei love it this is absolutely fabulous if only u wrote more stories
NewAgeRembrandt 2006-07-13 ch 1,	abuse^_^ This is ingenius. It's a unique idea and I loved it. You worded everything wonderfully and it was simply very cute. :)
Sour Lullaby 2006-07-11 ch 1,	abusem... YUMMY! that just satisfied my slash craving and now has replaced it with chocolate covered caramel cravings! POINTS TO YOU!
Silver Edged Fantasy 2006-06-29 ch 1,	abuseAw, I loved it. It was so cute!
Love Eternally 2006-06-28 ch 1,	abuseAw! That was really cute. Loved it. So want to see more written by you soon. Love Eternally.
Widom 2006-06-17 ch 1,	abuseAww...SO CUTE. The beginning made me think it might be kind of angsty, but I love the Chocolate/Caramel line. :)
Insomiak 2006-06-09 ch 1,	abuseDude. Love xO That was like, just, cute. xD

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