This was a very interesting read. I've never been to New York (though I'd like to one day) and this gave me some idea about how it is. It amazes me how truthful it all is, about everything. Anyway, enough of my rambling, I'll leave you to your work. ;)

oh, the ending was so good! There is a typo in the ninth from the bottom paragraph: it says "And it fwill all be..."Also: pigeons don't cheep. That bothered me for some reason.The ending was seriously very good.

i love this! i really like the form (whatever it is) it's very rambling(in a good way) and i like the title/last line. i love in NYC too, and it's never dark. actually now i have to go think about possible symbolism of that line. (math geeks forever)

This was good! Did your mom read it? I should hope not! lol...

I like this.. it feels really real. (I wonder why.) And parts of it were amusing. Hehe. I found a couple typos: stars not starts, it will not itwill, and capital H on Hallmark. I was in New York last summer and this feels similar, the energy of the city's captured well. And I can identify with the writer's block thing, too.

And thanks for the reviews! I looked up Imagine Me & You and it seemed vaguely similar, but I hadn't heard of it before anyway. Meh? =)

MEH U DIDN'T CREDIT UR WONDERFUL EDITOR *grs*

i like this story a lot. good improvement from the first version. "Hoe much I want to watch the sun setting. " rofl. okay i'll stop torturing u and ur typo-ness now.

yay for maia!