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the naked civil servant 2006-02-01 . chapter 1
oh my god what a seamless collection of gorgeous one-liners :P beautiful, beautiful. i'm feeling most empathic.
Prophetic Vixen 2006-01-28 . chapter 1
"You're sobbing self-lies into wire//while incessant thoughts of "why" are//now running through your head (the first real motion there in years.)"It's a very realistic emotion from someone who's been hurt terribly. Good job, mister man. Love this work.
Dark Elegance10 2006-01-22 . chapter 1
very good and very angsty.
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