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| q is for quirks 2006-01-28 ch 1,   | has a bittersweet feel to it. it's sad throughout most of the poem, but at the end, it's a little...what's the word...peaceful. yes, let's go with that. very good piece. |
| There's a gun to my head. 2006-01-23 ch 1, | This was kind of choppy. I think it was how you arranged the 'dialogue' You should consider using quotation marks or having some kind of structure.Good work though, it still was full of emotion. -TAGTMH |