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| Frostany 2007-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis poem had some really strong imagery in it that i really liked. I also really connected with the ending because i could just picture myself in the bathroom, calling out with a shaky voice to lie to my mom and tell her that I'm fine. |
| Lilac Ebony 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI like the poem very much but then i don't like it, don't get me wrong i really do like your poem its just because it makes me think of my inner demons, so to speak. |
| Morwain 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abusewow this was good i like |
| Aneliz Rei 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseIt is difficult for me to review this objectively, so I won't. But I was hospitalized last fall for bulimia so -- I don't know. I'm here? Somehow the piece seemed tritely phrased. Like there's something there, but...the words used to express it weren't enough to convey...I don't know. Its a difficult subject to write on. Only rarely do I attempt to do so. ~e |
| Bloody Emerald Tears 2006-02-15 ch 1, | abuseIt's like reading from the pages of my own life...beautifully written through the most detested things...keep writing |
| Aslan Israel 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abusemore than just the overused 'i'm too fat' theme. very nice. |
| kat\rossy\angel 2006-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abusehay we loved it! so sad |
| happypills03 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abusei know this feeling way way to well.. ive stopped though.. and if u r .. u should really stop too.. i work out everyday, but i still dont eat enough as i should.. its hard to get past the fact that ur not fat.. and that people love ur body.. have sex helps with that :P |
| Kelpylion 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWell-rhymed and with pretty sophisticated rhythm, especially in the last stanzas. You seem to understand the diseases really well, but I guess these are the same cliche`d (if true) things we always hear about the subject, so it was sort of unsatisfying. Maybe if you focused on the subject of one individual stanza, it would be better, 'cos you're dealing with so many ideas here. Still, quite a good poem. |
| BENZEE 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWOW THAT IS SAD |