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| dana-maru1 2006-02-06 ch 1,  | abuseA very well written, entertaining story. One of the kinds that you can't stop reading once you've started - and that's hard to find! Great work :) |
| Venustas iaceo 2006-02-03 ch 1, | abuseVehicular and first degree murder. Well, that's something unexpect, hm? I enjoy the foreshadowing in the beginning with Kat and her red dress, and I was rather entertained that the bad boy Matt got Ed away with that can of red spray paint. I liked this story. It's of a quality and genre I haven't actually read in a fair amount of time. |
| Autumnymph 2006-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseEverything's so messed up. I'm fine with the ending tho. The crazy guy got hit. The despicable abuser can go to jail for killing two people. Hey, ironic isn't it? You making this story end with a happy ending ^^ from my view lah XD |
| Drizit 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseCrazy storyline man. You'll fit right along with stephen king i think |