Grim. The blood part didn't make me squeemish, but curious. i like how it ended with that lyric.

I am assuming you couldn't care less about the bleeding, but a decent poem in my point of view. R&R me too please.

this one was like a song too! ^^ very good work. write on!

I like the simple words you have used in this song! Thanks for the review.

something a lot of people can relate to, which is always good...very nice

Heartfelt and honest; I loved the flow of this. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.