Very well written, and very soft. I too like the connection between the first and last lines (which I had not noticed until reading the others' reviews).

Kudos.

i like this especially that first line.. great piece

it's been a long time, huh? you're still as talented as ever. for some reason, the whole time I read this I kept thinking about "Hallelujah" by Leonard Cohen. seriously, amazing.

you are a master at description. everytime i read your work i'm constantly thinking 'i wish i thought of that.' the comparisons you make are entirely original, and this point is proven especially in the last two lines. amazing work.

again, such wonderful use of pace and wording. It runs so well, like breathless footsteps. I love that image ' shaking like lightning '. This is a delight to read, whatever it might mean.

oh, the last line... that is sheer beauty.

beautiful, absolutely.

you start it out in sort of mild observation, and end it in a kind of beautifulimperfection. i like that it starts and ends with a reference to something "holy".

excellentbeautiful job.

Beautiful, broken image of a boy. I feel like I'm in a coffee shop, watching him. Excellent work. I can see this very clearly. The images are great, and I love the theme echoed in the beginning and ending lines.

Simplistic and beautifully so. The imagery is dreamy but realistic at the same time. I love how the first and last line connect (wonderfully). I want to drink this divinity (ambrosia to be sure).

last line was gorgeous - this whole poem was gorgeous. lovedit.

Great wording here, a nice flow. I love the emotion.

Hillary