aw.so sweet :)
i LOVE how u wrote it and the whole idea
sigh...the ending was...perfect :)

hmm..im not sure if i liked riley or not...shes so..wierd!!liked the stori xD

WTF!! i really hate riley and courtney right now

seriuously alyssa should ditch them witches

i seriuosly love this story right now :D

i love it now :D

great job

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked Lyssa and Justin. I didn't really care for Riley she wasn't a very good friend.

Aww how sweet :D

x
Ali

yeugh... it was a good story except that she really pissed me off since she was really weak and annoying...

but whatever, it was a good read!

She really gotten on my nerves! I couldn't stand that she was a pushover! But I'm glad things worked out in the end. However, any longer I may have quit just because I was tired of her letting herself be doormat!

the story was good. like, i didn't like the character that much cuz she was SO oblivious and somewhat obnoxious..idk bugged me.
but the end was cute:]

It a good story. Slightly cheesy, but good. I liked it. They just kind of seemed to...get together, sort of. I thought that there might not have been enough...of them liking each other before this.

ok, i feel the need to review. you may have written this so long ago and you may have improved now, but i'll still say what i didn't like about this fic. i've read chapter 1-11 & the 1st part of this ch. (that is 12) and scanned the 2nd half. i don't think i could go on reading. why? romance is almost nonexistent, which is just something minor i think. is the romance here only incidental (?) because it says Drama/Humor, but it is still under the romance category. there is not much chemistry with the lead boy and girl. the girl is too much of a loser. i feel that she lacks self-respect. why would she chauffeur a friend who she's currently fighting with? the lead girl also talks to herself; honestly, who does that? it's far from being strange or weird; only mentally-ill people (IMHO) talk out loud to themselves. really, why embarrass yourself? ETC. anyway, i have enjoyed smooth move & would try to read other of your recent fics.

i couldn't believe she talks to herself out loud and actually agreed with Riley's stalking idea!

Wow, I loved it. So much more than plain romance, cliche, yet original.

i still can't accept that alyssa hangs around with people who so blatantly inconsiderate and ignorant!