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| italiangirl 2007-04-05 ch 7, | hi it's me! i know that u made this story a year ago but i just read it yestarday!and today...here i am! so.. this story is freakin(please tell me it's not a bad thing, u guys use it all the time)awesome! it almost make cry my eyes out (is it right?bho...)!it's so sweet!yeah the plot isn't very original...but everybody know that i love cliches (i know i'm making a big mess with words, but please deal with me). oh and nero means "black" in italian and the emperior was "Nerone", sorry i know i'm very annoyng. u'r so damn good at writing and i envy u so much! update soo the stories on too! ok i've finished. baci marta |
| Annilaia 2006-02-12 ch 7, | Haha! Thank you everyone for reviewing. It makes me happy :) Sure you can go print it off and show it off XD. Just as long as a whole bunch of people don't start doing it and claiming its theirs. O_O haha. Well I think I might come back later on and rewrite some of the parts of this one. But that won't be for a long time :P Thank you all again and keep reading! |
| Amy 2006-02-12 ch 7, | YAY! THANK-YOU EMMA! This story was great :) (and I'm not just saying that because I'm in it) keep writing and we'll all keep reviewing! ^__^ I luv you! |
| Gordo 2006-02-11 ch 7, | My God, I loved this story SO much! It was freakin amazing! The perfect story, I think. I usually don't like these kinda stories, but you know how to write a story that I'll like! It's weird, and you're really freaking me out. I am SO printing it off and showing all my friends! ^-^ Yess. And, you're very welcome for the keeping you going thing. I think I wanted to read it more than you wanted to finish it when I started reading it though! Regardless, awesome job, I can't wait to read something else by you. And, I'll push you to finish that one, too! xD! -Gordo P.S. GET SOME SLEEP! :P And the story was perfect. Flawless, amazingly perfect. You should be proud! |
| eternal symphony 2006-02-06 ch 1, | i like this!! its got a really kool idea going on and its very interesting i cant wait to read more! |
| Eelex 2006-02-02 ch 1, | Not bad, its pretty good. I got kind of confused in the middle because i couldnt tell whether amy was the old woman or not, but i found out later. Anyways, good work. |